its a half love story half adv prologue

My eyes half open and my head starts spinning. I cant control it! It's as if I am Dorothy in the tornado. But there's so much pain... it's all over. Dear god help me ...I'm (faintly)... blacking out.
I awake with a start to find myself in a white room... everything so white... but I can't move. What's happening? Who am I? Where am I? A burly man (in white) comes over to me and I could tell he was no good news so with all my fiery strength I burst the place into flames! (and pass out... again)
I slowly come into reality and saw small flames and ashes all around me (along with dead bodies) but right now that wasn't my concern. I had to get out, the dead are dead and I'm no healing faerie.
I am tired and I'm afraid I might not be able to control my powers. So I start digging ,of course i was still immune to the heat.
I am dying but I have to get out and say good bye to Amanda. I can't believe a warrior such as me would get so lucky as to be with a young woman like her. Me, Gaz the luckiest man on earth.
Wait I see light ,I'm out and alive. But for how long?

I have to see Amanda.

i guess it so bad u all speechless

Nono it's just I wsn't online. But you need to put more [:

i know it was just a quick thing i wrote in 5 min but im not actually goin to make a story out of it. i will post my real story when i finsh the proluge and a chapter or 2